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📋 题目


🎯 题型分析

项目内容
题型Agree/Disagree(观点类)
话题环境类/城市规划 - 交通政策
关键词private cars, banned, city centres
考察能力评估激进城市政策的利弊

🔍 审题要点


📝 高分范文


📊 结构拆解

【开头段】
├── 背景:congestion and pollution increasingly severe
├── 让步:sympathise with motivations
├── 立场:complete ban excessive and impractical
└── 预告:nuanced approach

【主体段1 - 支持禁止】
├── 引出:Proponents make compelling arguments
├── 论点1:pollution → health problems
├── 论点2:congestion → economic loss
├── 论点3:hostile to pedestrians
└── 证据:Oslo, Madrid, Ghent成功案例

【主体段2 - 反对禁止】
├── 转折:However, raises concerns
├── 公平问题:dependent groups(disabilities, elderly等)
├── 核心表达:disproportionately affect
├── 实际问题:without adequate alternatives
└── 后果:displace rather than solve

【主体段3 - 折中方案】
├── 过渡:more balanced approach
├── 具体措施:congestion charges, low-emission zones等
├── 配套要求:must be accompanied by investment
└── 重新定义目标:unnecessary, not criminalised

【结尾段】
├── 重申目标:worthy goal
├── 反对方法:neither feasible nor fair
├── 替代方案:graduated restrictions
└── 升华:accommodate human diversity

✨ 语言亮点

高分词汇

词汇/短语含义用法示例
excessive and impractical过度且不切实际a complete ban would be excessive
pedestrianised zones步行区pedestrianised zones can revitalise
outright ban完全禁止an outright ban raises concerns
disproportionately affect不成比例地影响disproportionately affect those who...
blanket prohibition一刀切的禁令a blanket prohibition
displace traffic转移交通流量simply displace traffic elsewhere
congestion charges拥堵费congestion charges can reduce car use
low-emission zones低排放区low-emission zones
graduated restrictions渐进式限制graduated restrictions
one-size-fits-all一刀切的not impose one-size-fits-all solutions

高分句型


🔄 可迁移表达

这些表达可以用于其他政策类话题:

原句可迁移到
"sympathise with the motivations behind such proposals"任何需要承认对方立场的话题
"disproportionately affect vulnerable groups"社会政策、税收、医疗等话题
"accompanied by substantial investment in..."需要配套措施的政策讨论
"a more nuanced approach"任何需要提出折中方案的话题
"restrict rather than prohibit"烟酒管控、网络监管等话题

💭 思考延伸


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